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Susanne Drazic - 8 years ago

Hi, Sara. Your blog is the first stop of the day. I liked your short story. Great job!

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    Sara C. Snider - 8 years ago

    Thanks, Susanne! 🙂

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Laura Clipson - 8 years ago

I think you’ve definitely pulled off that voice, this story had me right there alongside the main character. A great tale for Halloween 🙂

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    Sara C. Snider - 8 years ago

    Woo! Thanks, Laura! 🙂

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dee little - 8 years ago

Great story!

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    Sara C. Snider - 8 years ago

    Thanks, Dee! 🙂

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Tanya Miranda - 8 years ago

I’ve always been scared of the woods, and you’ve given me another reason to be.

Her breath smelled of “old meat” – that was the turning point for me. I love the smooth progression, from spotting a simple beauty and then transforming it into a frightful darkness.

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    Sara C. Snider - 8 years ago

    Don’t be afraid of the woods! Just don’t go wandering after strange lights in the dark. 😉 Thanks, Tanya! 🙂

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Katie Cross - 8 years ago

Oh, I loved it! Such a fantastic voice in this piece. Seriously. What a great story. Had me from the beginning. I love the idea you took with ‘catching your death’.

Fabulous!

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    Sara C. Snider - 8 years ago

    Yay! Thanks, Katie! It makes me very glad to think I might have actually pulled it off. 🙂

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Missy Snider Adelson - 8 years ago

Wonderful imagery, Sara!

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    Sara C. Snider - 8 years ago

    Thanks, Missy! 😀

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LC Valdes - 8 years ago

I really enjoyed this. I especially loved the “catch a death” idea – made me smile.

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    Sara C. Snider - 8 years ago

    Thanks, LC! 🙂

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